Tuesday, April 28, 2015

Summary and Analysis of Fifth Business by Robertson Davies

Author
Robertson Davies

Setting
Deptford, Ontario
Various Part of Europe
Toronto

Characters
Dunstable Ramsay (Dunstan): The protagonist of the story, great ego and pride, serves as the fifth business of the story until the end of the story
Percy Boyd Staunton (Boy): life-long friend and nemesis of Dunstan, lives purely for material gain and personal success
Paul Dempster (Magnus Eisengrim): Magical magician who grows to resent Dunstan and everything regarding his mother and Deptford. Christ figure
Mrs. Dempster: The woman who Dunstan idolizes as a saint, performed three miracles.
Liesl: Bearded woman who offered a large quantity of insight into the dark folds of Dunstan's life.
Padre Blazon: Devout Jesuit and Mentor to Dustan, also provides insight
Leola: High School sweetheart to both Dunstan and Boy, but later becomes pitied by both until her death

Plot
Part 1: Mrs. Dempster
  1. Introduction to Memoir: Dunstan is writing to a headmaster about some article that was written about him. The story follows.
  2. As a boy, Dunstan coming come from playing dodges a snowball, which strikes Mrs. Dempster instead. Paul's premature birth ensues.
  3. Dunstan begins to watch over Mrs. Dempster and Paul. He teaches Paul magic tricks.
  4. Mrs. Dempster has sex with a hobo and becomes shunned by Deptford.
  5. Mrs. Dempster brings Dunstan's brother back to life, significant increase of idolization.
  6. Dunstan enlists in the WWI draft to escape his mother
Part 2: I Am Born Again
  1. Earns the Victoria's Cross medal from brutally murdering a bunch of Germans in a machine gun nest, becomes national hero.
  2. Wakes up in the hospital after being in a coma for months- missing a leg
  3. Falls in love with nurse, Diana
  4. Breaks up with Diana, who re-names him
  5. Goes back to Deptford, parents are dead, Paul ran away, and decides to move to Toronto to attend University; becomes friends with Boy there
Part 3: My Fool-Saint
  1. Gets degree in History
  2. Boy earns money through some scheming, and becomes distinguished through an empire in sugar
  3. Dunstan travels to Europe using the money he acquired through Boy, where he finds out that the hobo that Mrs. Dempster had sex with was "saved".
  4. Briefly encounters Paul Dempster and Liesl in Europe
Part 4: Gyges and King Candaules
  1. Back in Toronto, Boy tempts Dunstan with Leola
  2. Dunstan is names Mary Dempster's guardian when her aunt dies, and is then obligated to care for her
  3. Meets Padre Blazon back in Europe while working with Jesuit priests
Part 5: Liesl
  1. Serves as interim headmaster during WWII, Boy is away at international philanthropic efforts, Leola dies with only Dunstan to manage the funeral
  2. Boy asks Dunstan to step down as headmaster and he gets a sabbatical to travel to Mexico with.
  3. Meets Paul again (now Magnus Eisengrim) and his bearded lady friend, Liesl. Joins their magic show as a writer
  4. Liesl tells Dunstan that he is fifth business and has a sexualized brawl with her> she becomes his mentor
Part 6: The Soirée of Illusions
  1. Boy remarries
  2. Dunstan upsets Mrs. Dempster by telling her about Paul, and he becomes her enemy. He never visits her again until she dies
  3. Dunstan introduces Paul and Boy to eachother in Toronto and reveals the long-kept secret of the rock in the snowball.
  4. Paul kills Boy; Dunstan has a heart when he finds out at the Eisengrim show

*This plot summary may be a little too long, but I didn't think I could really condense it any more*

Quotes
“God is subtle, but He is not cruel” -Padre Blazon (pg. 179)
This quote is in reference to when Blazon is explaining to Dunstan that the misfortune of Mrs. Dempster's life was likely a small part of the greater work of God, therefor, Dunstan should not brood over the guilt he feels for her misfortune. Furthermore, Blazon explains that the greater workings of God are far too complex for the understanding of man, so the categorizing of "good" and "bad" is arbitrary in comparison. One must embrace the graduations of light and darkness within one's self, because the categories created by society are not always appropriate for the varying circumstances of life.

“I was afraid and did not know what I feared, which is the worst kind of fear." -Dunstan (pg. 41)
In this part, Dunstan is helping the men of the town search for Mrs. Dempster. He is literally afraid because he is having trouble navigating the dangerous gravel pit, but also, he feels underlying angst to the array of dark possibilities of what may lie before him in the night. This quote also exemplifies the problems that Dunstan had with confronting and accepting the darkness of his life.

Theme
In today's society, people are so self-centered that they cannot recognize or appreciate truth.
~OR~
An individual must be willing to live by the dichotomy of their personal moral compass in order to reach individuation and create a meaningful mythology out of their life.


Sunday, April 19, 2015

Response to Course Materials

These past couple of weeks have been interesting enough as far as school goes. AP Lit is still my favorite class, and is really the only class that I consistently enjoy. Exams are only two weeks away, and it is an understatement to say that I am worried. I don't have any experience with taking AP exams so it really will be a hit or a miss for me. I got my AP exam study guide, so I suppose I'll be alright.

One thing that we did toward the beginning of this unit was Critical lenses. There are so many different lenses to consider when reading a work. I'm still moderately confused on this one because it seems like lenses are more of a personal template for criticism rather than "different ways we can interpret". I mean, yeah I can understand how a feminist critic would interpret a work, but should I be applying it to my criticisms? Personally, I often find myself contemplating the psychological aspects of the literature we read in class. That's just how I think.

We also did another set of Open prompts. They are getting A LOT easier to do now. I do have a confession to make on the subject. I wrote my last open prompt part 2 using Fifth Business. This was probably a bad move on my part because we had not discussed it in class at the time. So, who ever reads this post, I hope you know this before you read my open prompt post because there is a 100% chance it is terrible. I think it will be interesting to look back and compare my thoughts on the book from when i wrote the essay and when we finish our in-class discussions.

We also finished Frankenstein. I don't really have much to say on this, and I think I talked about it a bit in my last RCM. Cool concepts, exceptional book, interesting intentions and effects.

Fifth business. Oh my, Fifth Business. Anyone in 6th hour probably has an idea of how much I love this book. It is my favorite work that we've read in class, BY FAR. There is just so much to think about from this book, every single event and detail serves a purpose, and I can not wait to unravel the mystery with my class. I also am anticipating some future conflicts in out class discussions because I feel that this book can be interpreted on a lot of different platforms.

30 seconds of mythology. I did it, it took like an hour, and it was interesting.

The End.

Wednesday, April 15, 2015

Summary and Analysis of Frankenstein by Mary Shelley

Author
Mary W. Shelley

Setting
18th century Europe
V.F. childhood: Genve
V.F. college: Inglolstatd
Walton's letters: on a ship in the arctic circle

Characters
Victor Frankenstein: The inventor of the creature and the protagonist of the novel. A man driven by ambition and scientific curiosity. His hubris is his tragic flaw and what drives him to ruin.
Elizabeth Lavenza: Sister and bride of Victor; is adopted into the family as a small child (depending on which version). Often spoken about with angelic features and represents ideal womanhood.
Caroline Frankenstein: Victor's mother. Her death is what causes Victor's desire to transcend death.
Alphonse Frankenstein: Victor's father.
*Victor's parents want the very best for him and spoiled him throughout his childhood, resulting in him growing up to have a god-like self image and selfishness.*
William Frankenstein: The youngest son of the Frankenstein family. Is killed by the creature and symbolizes the loss of innocence.
Henry Clerval: Victor's life-long friend and literary foil.
The Creature: The monster that is created by Victor, he is the mirror image of his creator.
Robert Walton: An explorer who Victor meets on a ship in the Arctic circle. Represent the common masses of the world in their exploration of knowledge and human capability. The only person to whom Victor can relate.

Plot
R.W.'s Letters:
  1. Robert Walton, who is on a fearless expedition to the North Pole, and his crew take in an interesting weary traveler who is on the brink of death (Victor Frankenstein). 
  2. After befriending the traveler, Walton is given the privileged to hear his long-concealed story.
Frankenstein's POV:
  1. Victor tells of his privileged childhood, it is emphasized here how he was treated like a God by his parents and developed into a strong narcissism.
  2. The family adopts an orphan named Elizabeth out of the kindness of their hearts, but also intends her to be Victor's bride. (Example of how they were willing to do anything to make Victor happy and social as possible--- evidence of his abnormal youth)
  3. Henry Clerval is introduced as Victor's BFF.
  4. Victor leaves to study in Inglolstadt, where his fervor for science and metaphysics grows immensely. His chemistry professor excites this passion, thus beginning Victor's unnatural obsession with the principles of life and the boundaries of death.
  5. Victor creates the monster which escapes from the laboratory.
  6. Victor learns through a letter from Elizabeth that his younger brother, William, has been murdered; On his way back to Geneva, he see a figure and assumes in terror that it is his creation
  7. Justine drama
  8. Victor flees from the stressful environment at home and meets the Monster while on a solitary hike in the mountains.
The Creature's POV:
  1. The monster traveled very far after his birth and found refuge in a hovel adjacent to the cottage of an exiled French family. Here he observes the behavior of human life and longs desperately and hopelessly to be a part of it.
  2. Determined to seek revenge on Victor, sets out for Geneva. There he wanders upon William and kills him and frames Justine.
  3. The monster then demands that Victor make him a woman.
Frankenstein's POV:
  1. Victor goes to England with Henry to build the new monster. 
  2. He retreats to a desolate corner of Scotland (after ditching Henry) and begins to build her.
  3. in fear of reproduction, he destroys the new monster before he can finish it, and the monster declares to "be with him on his wedding night". Here Victor exemplifies his narcissism by assuming that the monster would try to kill him, not Elizabeth.
  4. Victor throws the mangled body parts into the lake, washes ashore, is accused of murder of Henry, falls into a fever, then is escorted him by his father.
  5. Elizabeth is strangles to death on her wedding night by the monster, Victor's father dies of grief
  6. Victor decides to spend the rest of his life pursuing the creature and to kill it.
R.W.'s Letters:
  1. Victor dies after telling his story
  2. The monster appears, talks to Walton about his regret for his actions but justifies them with his suffering, then declares that he will commit suicide. Then the monster leaves.

Quotes
"What may not be expected in a country of eternal light?" (10) -Robert Walton
On the surface, Walton is simply referring to how the sun never sets in the arctic circle during the winter, however, it can also be applied to the 18th century scientific idealism. The exploration and discovery of new scientific knowledge was not only necessary but inherently positive and pious. This aligns with Victor's point of view before and during the creation of the monster. This quote, which is placed very early in the novel, alludes to the parallelism between Frankenstein and Walton in terms of their expectations of their studies.

"I, the miserable and the abandoned, am an abortion, to be spurned at, and kicked, and trampled on." (185) -The Monster
The Monster says this when expressing his suffering to Robert Walton over the body of Victor Frankenstein at the end of the book. This quote exemplifies the monster's self-pity and demand for empathy. It also shows how the monster justifies the motivation for his actions with his self-declared suffering. He also uses the word, "abortion", which is motif from the novel and supports that the monster was abandoned and shunned by his creator as well as the world.

Theme
When mankind's hubris causes society to reject the natural order, it leads to dire consequences.
Frankenstein's hubris the clearly the cause of every unnatural and tragic event in the story, but a point that Mary Shelley was trying to make throughout the entire novel was how society reacts to and subsequently rejects the unnatural "thing". Completely alienated from society, the monster has no one to relate to other than his creator, who also immediately rejected and shunned him. This rejection leads to the monster's acts of violence and revenge specifically on Victor's loved ones. Chaos stemming from the ego-maniacal and self-involved of the protagonist makes the point that Shelley is voicing the public fear or scientific exploration and discovery from her time period. Frankenstein serves as a warning against taking the privilege of free-will and human capability too far, and into the realm of unnatural actions which rebel against religious law and Providence.

Sunday, April 12, 2015

Open Prompt Part Two: 2005

2005 Prompt: In Kate Chopin’s The Awakening (1899), protagonist Edna Pontellier is said to possess “That outward existence which conforms, the inward life that questions.” In a novel or play that you have studied, identify a character who outwardly conforms while questioning inwardly. Then write an essay in which you analyze how this tension between outward conformity and inward questioning contributes to the meaning of the work. Avoid mere plot summary.

Saturday, April 11, 2015

Open Prompt Part One: 2005 Student Responses

2005 Prompt: In Kate Chopin’s The Awakening (1899), protagonist Edna Pontellier is said to possess “That outward existence which conforms, the inward life that questions.” In a novel or play that you have studied, identify a character who outwardly conforms while questioning inwardly. Then write an essay in which you analyze how this tension between outward conformity and inward questioning contributes to the meaning of the work. Avoid mere plot summary.

A: This essay is exceptional because its theme statement effectively assesses the prompt and formats the student's argument. The student clearly understands the format needed for a organized AP essay (ending each body paragraph with synthesis to the overall meaning of the work), and has a writing style which is clear and enticing. Great essay, it could use a bit more organization and transition between ideas, but succeeds at providing an in depth analysis of the work.

B: This essay is accomplished with a strong thesis and analysis of Nora's inward struggle and outward conformity. However, the writer does not effectively answer the prompt in the conclusion. He states that the author is commenting on the sexism of a specific society, however, the meaning of a work should be able to translate to any era and society throughout time. This essay does not look into the play with depth and lacks the caliber of writing that would be expected.

C: Right off from the start this essay has technical errors; NEVER restate the prompts and ALWAYS include the author's full name with the first mention of the work's title. This essay does not have a clear thesis in the introductory paragraph. The questioning of identity of the protagonist is completely different than the inward struggle vs. outward conformity mentioned in the prompt. The writer does not discuss the meaning of the work at all and fails to answer the prompt entirely.

Sunday, March 22, 2015

Response to Course Materials

Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are finished! We finally finished reading and analyzing the play... kind of. I don't think our class actually came up with a theme statement for the play, which supports our title as the least-productive class! Overall, I really liked the play. I missed a lot of class over the past couple of weeks, so I think I may have missed quite a bit of class discussion and analysis. This is a real bummer because out of all of the works that we have gone over in class, this one may be the one that we could use the most during the AP exam essay. Like what I said in the previous RCM post, when we were in the middle of our discussion process, R&G really tripped me up. Now I am contemplating the meaning of life during basically every past-time, from long car rides to the boring parts of physics class. Who am I kidding? I contemplate the meaning of life in every part of Physics class. That shit is boring.

The next thing we did on blogger was our peer reviews. I got some interesting comments from some interesting people, which is always fun. I also got some great feedback that I am definitely going to use during my editing session. Last time we got comments, I completely forgot to do my blog revisions on time and it totally came back to bite me! Not happening again, and this time I'll do even better. Just as Jimmy Carter once said, "You can do what you have to do, and sometimes you can do it even better than you think you can."

Frankenstein was also started during this past couple of weeks. I have yet to form an opinion on the book. I also would like to point out that this is the first work that we have read that was not created primarily to be performed on stage!

We also found out through the Kahoots how terrible we actually are at learning on our own. The
whole Critical lenses and literary eras was difficult, but I think I got the jest of it.

Open prompts are getting a LOT easier. The second time around, I kind of had a feel for what I was supposed to be doing. I also think that my essay that I wrote turned out 100x better. I went to Schuler's on a Sunday afternoon (it was surprisingly not busy) and sat in the corner and got to work. I may have gotten too deep on the open prompt, but hey you only live once, right?